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martes, 23 de octubre de 2012

Poor mother...

                                                  Poor mother...
August 2002, where Mili and his son Tom. Also it was all her family.

There was a family where the things weren't very good between Mili and Tom. The things were sad because Mili was very angry at Tom and Tom was very angry at Mili. They weren't good between themselves because all the days Mili said bad things of Tom and Tom was angry. Also in the family there was a problem with social class. All the family try to solve this but they couldn't solve it. The problem was that all the family started talking and they said that they had to send Tom and Mili to the psychologist but the problem was that they were very poor and they couldn't pay all those things. The problem of this was the social class because none of the family worked and they didn't have money to pay the doctor. Well then the years passed by and Tom was 18 years, and Mili 45 years old. There was a very bad problem. Another problem to the family. The problem was that Tom hit Mili and the father couldn't do anything because Tom was stronger than the father. The years passed and Tom went to another country to live and all his family was sad. Tom left nothing in the country that he lived that was United States. In the country that he moved that was Germany he could work and he became millionarie and before he was poor. He bought a house and a car and he lived well but he was sad because of his family and more because of the mother. Well  then he stayed one year and he forgot of all his family and he was very happy. Then when the years passed he was sad because his family because he thought of  his family and all the family started to search to Tom in all the countries and they couldn't find him. And they went to United States and he went to his house and all his family was happy and Tom talked to them and said that he was a millionarie and he gave money to all his family. The family got together and thought how they could solve the conflict between Tom and Mili and they called them and all the relatives started to tell things to Tom and Mili and the conflict was solved and all the relatives stayed very happy.
                                                                      
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martes, 29 de noviembre de 2011

myth


God's Travel

At the begining of the times, God was trying to finish this wonderful creation, Earth. Pitfully there was someone born in the world who was completely different from God, Devil.He was the worst person that had ever existed. He disagreed in everything. God made plants, water, soil, people, vegetation, fruits among other things. But vegetables couldn't grow from the air, so he created trees but there was a problem: Devil. He didn't agree in making that. He thought that humans could be so stupid that they would not reailse. But God Thought completely different. So God on purpose tried to make humans more inteligents. But Devil made the more stupid every day. Finally God and Devil fought a super master battle wich consisted in playing paintball. After long hours long hours of battle God could won and defeat Devil. He could do what he wnated. After all humans realised about vegetables and developed other new techniques to get better food every single day.

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