Oh! I am very happy, because my son made the comic and he sended it to the magazine, I was very nervous in the moment that he sended it.
I am very ancious, the magazine accepted the comic of my son, he is also very happy, i think that is the best moment of my life.
He sended the comic a 2nd time but I dont want it because if they don´t accept the comic he is going to be very disappointed.
Oh my god, he send it a second time, I will see if the magazine will accept the comic, and if they didn´t accept it i will be very hungry with them
Fran: Remember "sent" is the right past form.
ResponderEliminarIn the 2nd and 3rd paragraph you repeat the fact that he sent a second comic to the magazine. I still don´t understand why you´re mentioning it twice, it makes your writing sound a bit repetitive.
Spelling: be careful with angry & hungry.
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